Posted on 28 May 2012 with categories: Phi Brain

The sliding puzzles arc has some really big flaws, combined with a number of things that look suspiciously much like flaws, but can be written out of with the right writers.

Let me start with the big flaw of this arc; one that can’t be excused at this point: we’re basically watching five episodes about the same game here. No variations, it’s five episodes of sliding puzzles. That is way too much and way too long. I’m not opposed to the tournament set-up: it’s clear that the creators intended this to be an arc chock full of character development. For that it makes sense to devote an entire arc to just one game. But writers: you should have picked different puzzles to do this with. This is just lazy.

Another flaw here seems to be the cheese. The long format of this arc leads to a lot of time being devoted to characters angsting. I felt that the first season did this better (although I do admit that none of the characters in the second season comes even close to being as bad as that one villain of the first season who smashed the screen with his chair out of anger…). I’m missing a bit of balance here.

Now, the flaws that seem like the writers wrote themselves into a corner, but can still get out of with the right direction: the bizarre plot devices:
– First there is this mysterious “data” that cubic collected, which was way too vague. With an entire episode being dedicated to him collecting that “data”, it has to be something pretty awesome to make up for it.
– Then there was the previous episode. There, it was established that Freecell hates Kaito because he made him sad on the day that his mother died, causing his mother to die sad, but in this episode made it look more like he outright killed the woman. The funeral scene definitely hinted that there is something more going on, but really: there are still so many ways in which that back-story can end up as a complete disaster.
– And then there was this episode with Ana Gram. At one point he suddenly from out of nowhere reveals that he has an older sister… oh hey Mizerka, what are you doing here?

the way the creators can fix this by making Mizerka just some random girl who grew up with Freecell. My biggest issue with this is the way it was built up though: it does make sense for Ana’s sister to be sent to England as well, but don’t just introduce this from nowhere and show hints that Mizerka actually knows Ana. The creators could have avoided this by making Mizerka incredibly stoic to her sister: with that it would have made sense if this came out of nowhere, but this episode also shot down that potential thread by making Mizerka just flip out: she is not the type of person to hide her feelings.

When the second season first was announced, I really thought that the first season was made with the second season in mind. Right now though, it’s pretty obvious that the writers only learned that there would be a second season after the first one was completely written. Most of the times they were able to hid this very well, but Ana’s sister really is a big hint that the second season was written much later. It really feels like a nice idea one of the writers had along the way to add to his character, because if she really is so special to Ana, then he would have mentioned that somewhere in the first season.

Rant aside by the way: I did like this episode. I mean, I think that Ana is a very interesting character to watch, and he used his charm well here. He’s much more interesting than Cubic in any case, so it’s great for him to have another episode dedicated to him. The way she managed to cheer up Kaito was also quite heart-warming.
Rating: *+ (Great)

4 Responses

  1. kuromitsu says:

    Mizerka is not Ana’s sister, that was made pretty clear – unless of course she has a split personality even she doesn’t know about. In the end Mizerka mentions that Ana is just like how Eve described her, so she knows Eve, but is not Eve herself.

  2. Rolca says:

    I do agree on the angsting and Freecell’s story which must have more to it. But we knew absolutely nothing about Ana’s background up to now! All he did was weird metaphors and paintings.

    I’m not sure I understand what you meant about Mizerka. She could have met Eve outside England, for all we know. Mizerka is usually calm, Ana and Kaito just pissed her off.

    I’m expecting the POG to crash into Prouder Horse at the end of the next episode. The data Cubic sent to Jikukawa was sent to Maze and we get an update on their side at the end of the episode. The arc is going to be reduced to 4 episodes anyway since Kaito and Gammon do a 2 vs 2 in the preview.

  3. Mirun says:

    One I absolutely agree, Phi Brain second season is just wow. And very disappointing. I was a little iffy originally when Freecell was crying that Kaito didn’t remember him. Then the big reveal on the last episode, I was in utter disbelief. I was like, really this is why you want revenge and take over the world. Because you are filled with just angst. At least Rook kind of have a better reason, at least he knew Kaito more than one day and talked to him more than one day. But even then Rook’s motivations were slightly iff “you don’t love me any more”. Okay then Rook. But at least there was development in the character. Not this Freecell crap. And I mean who names their child Freecell, obviously she didn’t love him as much because there is no hell in way you name a kid Freecell. I hope it’s a code name, because wow.

Leave a Reply

Shoutbox

Name:
Email:
For:  
Mail will not be published
  • AidanAK47
    (Tuesday, Jul 29. 2014 04:24 AM)
    @Wicked, I think it’s very good. The protagonist is despicable at the start. It’s a slow burn. The novel doesn’t follow standard Light novel conventions and it’s very addictive.
    I recommend giving the first novel a shot and see if you want to continue.
  • Wicked
    (Tuesday, Jul 29. 2014 03:30 AM)
    is Mushoku Tensei any good? That’s definitely one that I simply judge by the title and never picked up
  • Vincent
    (Tuesday, Jul 29. 2014 02:53 AM)
    Just wondering, how many new members were here before I arrived? It seems like there should be a lot, given how active us newcomers are on here.
  • Emma
    (Tuesday, Jul 29. 2014 02:25 AM)
    And I pay very little care or attention to background music much of the time in anime so fug Kajura =<
  • Emma
    (Tuesday, Jul 29. 2014 02:06 AM)
    @Silty: I’ve read 19 chapters of the manga adaptation for that, I don’t think that adaptation has reached that part yet though. Is the anime moving things along quickly? I’ve not read the light novel.
    I’m not even going to say its a good, great series even because it isn’t, I was told it would make me feel like I was watching zero no tsukaima again and thats enough for me I guess for it to be my guilty pleasure.
  • K-Off
    (Tuesday, Jul 29. 2014 01:46 AM)
    @Silty I don’t even watch that series, and I don’t think anyone else here does, but I think Fairy Tail had one of the best tournament arc I’d ever seen.
  • Silty
    (Tuesday, Jul 29. 2014 01:45 AM)
    This might sound a little insane, but anyone else who read Seirei Tsukai think it has the best tournament arc ever? Overall it’s not that great, but just that part of it is quite amazing IMO. At the very least, it’s up there with the tournament arcs in YYH
  • AidanAK47
    (Monday, Jul 28. 2014 10:49 PM)
    Just found out that Yuki Kajura is not doing the soundtrack for Fate UBW. Honestly, thank god for that. I am so tired of her.
  • JaK
    (Monday, Jul 28. 2014 07:06 PM)
    K-off its the same for most light novels no biggy some people take it to the heart :P
  • AidanAK47
    (Monday, Jul 28. 2014 07:03 PM)
    JAK! Goddamnit man some of us don’t like spoliers.

1 · 2 · 3 · 4 · 5 · »

Featured Posts

Clipboard03

Mushishi – 07

Now this was such a beautiful episode. We often see Mushi portrayed as parasites. In fact, they are pretty much based on the insects and viruses of their world. There probably are enough real viruses and insects living in the Mushishi world, but they just aren’t the focus of the series. Anyway, what they did […]

Clipboard04

Jojo’s Bizarre Adventure – Stardust Crusaders – 06 & 07

This is where this arc gets weird. We’re still in adventure modus, however in these two episodes Jotaro not only meets some of the most bizarre Stand users, it’s also done in the most camp way possible. You can see a clear difference with the first two seasons of Jojo: there it was all about […]

Clipboard01

Ping Pong – 05 & 06

Episodes 05 and 06 are dedicated to character-development. It’s here where Ping Pong shows that it also knows its stuff in terms of storytelling; the develoment doesn’t start too early or too late, and these two episodes really added depth to all of the different characters, despite that there were no big matches. I’m currently […]

Clipboard01

Mushishi – 03 – 06

I have not forgotten about this show. Not at all. I just finished marathoning these four episodes, and holy cheeseballs on a stick! this is the best anime in years! This was everything I could have hoped for and blows just about everything else out of the water. Talk about raw, powerful storytelling. I now […]

Clipboard03

Jojo’s Bizarre Adventure – 03 – 05

Jojo really is not kind to its females. Every time a hint is even dropped to a girl kicking ass here, it comes with this weird plot-twist that undermines any fighting potential of them. In this arc, it’s the rule that says that your stand will kill you if youaren’t strong enough. And so, Joseph’s […]

Clipboard01

Ping Pong – 03 & 04

The opening of Ping Pong wasn’t done in time, so the first two episodes showed a sortof montage as a placeholder. Now we know why, with episode 03 and 04. The creators actually got the single best animator currently in the business to oversee it: Shinya Ohira. This guy understands animation like no other. The […]

Clipboard07

Ping Pong – 02

Yes, I know that more people here were involved in making this series beyond Masaaki Yuasa. It’s written by the creator of Tekkon Kinkreet, Taiyo Mashimoto. That guy is awesome. And the combination between those two makes this series even better. Because here’s the thing: anime is significantly different from manga or light novels. Beyond […]

Clipboard02

Jojo’s Bizarre Adventure – Stardust Crusaders – 02

We can never quite get rid of magic fights at a school, now can we, Jojo. Ah well, I forgive it this time, just due to how hilarious it looks seeing these ridiculously bulky men walk around pretending to be high school students. It’s just so over the top, and yet Jojo sets itself apart […]

Clipboard01

Mushishi Season 2 – 02

Oh yes. This is it. This is what storytelling should be about: telling real stories about real people, all with their own problems that need to be overcome. And this show does that time and time again in just one episode. I still can’t believe how authentic this series is. The thing is, when I […]

Latest Reviews

Clipboard03

Kick Heart

Okay, so I didn’t want to exit 2013 without having seen Masaaki Yuasa’s Kick Heart. It’s only twelve minutes anyway, and I consider him to be one of the best anime directors out there. The story here is pretty silly and mostly serves as a backdrop, so I mostly want to talk about the nature […]

Clipboard01

Kyousogiga Review – 90/100

Everyone’s taste is different, and that’s a wonderful thing because that allows us to have so many different forms of media that all aim toward their own niche. My blog is obviously written from the perspective of my own taste, and even when a show doesn’t cater to it (which is nearly always), I love […]

Clipboard04

Ore no Nounai Sentakushi ga, Gakuen Lovecome o Zenryoku de Jama Shiteiru Review – 80/100

Noucome! You do not want to know how long I have been waiting for a series like this. More than half a decade, at the very least. Finally a series comes along and puts the incredibly overused harem genre in its place. And it actually does it well. Thank you! So to elaborate: the harem […]

Clipboard01

Pokemon: The Origin Review – 75/100

Normally I try to avoid spoilers with these reviews, but screw it, it’s Pokemon. Pokemon The Origin is a bomb of nostalgia. If you haven’t played Pokemon Red, Blue or Green, then you will not enjoy this one slight bit. This really is made as pure undilluted fanservice for the fans of the first games. […]

Clipboard08

Tamayura – More Aggressive Review – 75/100

I’m not going to dedicate a post for my impression for the final three episodes of this series. It was just too boring to write much about. I guess that that gives a pretty accurate indication of what I think about this series. Right at the start of Tamayura’s second season, I asked one question: […]

Clipboard04

Silver Spoon Review – 86/100

When Noitamina started airing two series per season, it was amazing. It’s a timeslot that on average tends to be aimed at a much older audience than usual, and having two series with the same mentality definitely helped to bring more diversity to anime overall. Unfortunately it’s a schedule that could not be kept up […]

Clipboard07

Yondemasuyo, Azazel-San Z Review – 82,5/100

Reviewing a comedy sequel usually is quite simple: in most cases it just drops the bomb and runs out of inspiration, and in rare cases it actually manages to stay hilarious. The tricky thing with these kinds of series is that you need to remain funny, and you need to have the inspiration for that. […]

Clipboard05

Gargantia on the Verdurous Planet Review – 81/100

Gargantia on the Verdurous Planet tells the storyline of a planet that is completely submerged, with only giant ships residing on the surface, while one of those ships gets visited by this guy and his AI-mecha from this very technologically advanced civilization. Yes, this show is about world building. What this show managed to do […]

Clipboard01

Yahari Ore no Seishun no Love Come wa Machigatteiru Review – 82,5/100

I like surprises, like when a series comes that just turns out to be good against my expectations. Yahari Blahblah from the outside had all the signs to turn into yet another one of those high school comedies: snarky male lead, pointlessly long title that fails at being witty, various other cliched side-characters. And they […]