Posted by psgels on 28 May 2012 with categories: Phi Brain

The sliding puzzles arc has some really big flaws, combined with a number of things that look suspiciously much like flaws, but can be written out of with the right writers.

Let me start with the big flaw of this arc; one that can’t be excused at this point: we’re basically watching five episodes about the same game here. No variations, it’s five episodes of sliding puzzles. That is way too much and way too long. I’m not opposed to the tournament set-up: it’s clear that the creators intended this to be an arc chock full of character development. For that it makes sense to devote an entire arc to just one game. But writers: you should have picked different puzzles to do this with. This is just lazy.

Another flaw here seems to be the cheese. The long format of this arc leads to a lot of time being devoted to characters angsting. I felt that the first season did this better (although I do admit that none of the characters in the second season comes even close to being as bad as that one villain of the first season who smashed the screen with his chair out of anger…). I’m missing a bit of balance here.

Now, the flaws that seem like the writers wrote themselves into a corner, but can still get out of with the right direction: the bizarre plot devices:
– First there is this mysterious “data” that cubic collected, which was way too vague. With an entire episode being dedicated to him collecting that “data”, it has to be something pretty awesome to make up for it.
– Then there was the previous episode. There, it was established that Freecell hates Kaito because he made him sad on the day that his mother died, causing his mother to die sad, but in this episode made it look more like he outright killed the woman. The funeral scene definitely hinted that there is something more going on, but really: there are still so many ways in which that back-story can end up as a complete disaster.
– And then there was this episode with Ana Gram. At one point he suddenly from out of nowhere reveals that he has an older sister… oh hey Mizerka, what are you doing here?

the way the creators can fix this by making Mizerka just some random girl who grew up with Freecell. My biggest issue with this is the way it was built up though: it does make sense for Ana’s sister to be sent to England as well, but don’t just introduce this from nowhere and show hints that Mizerka actually knows Ana. The creators could have avoided this by making Mizerka incredibly stoic to her sister: with that it would have made sense if this came out of nowhere, but this episode also shot down that potential thread by making Mizerka just flip out: she is not the type of person to hide her feelings.

When the second season first was announced, I really thought that the first season was made with the second season in mind. Right now though, it’s pretty obvious that the writers only learned that there would be a second season after the first one was completely written. Most of the times they were able to hid this very well, but Ana’s sister really is a big hint that the second season was written much later. It really feels like a nice idea one of the writers had along the way to add to his character, because if she really is so special to Ana, then he would have mentioned that somewhere in the first season.

Rant aside by the way: I did like this episode. I mean, I think that Ana is a very interesting character to watch, and he used his charm well here. He’s much more interesting than Cubic in any case, so it’s great for him to have another episode dedicated to him. The way she managed to cheer up Kaito was also quite heart-warming.
Rating: *+ (Great)

4 Responses

  1. kuromitsu says:

    Mizerka is not Ana’s sister, that was made pretty clear – unless of course she has a split personality even she doesn’t know about. In the end Mizerka mentions that Ana is just like how Eve described her, so she knows Eve, but is not Eve herself.

  2. Rolca says:

    I do agree on the angsting and Freecell’s story which must have more to it. But we knew absolutely nothing about Ana’s background up to now! All he did was weird metaphors and paintings.

    I’m not sure I understand what you meant about Mizerka. She could have met Eve outside England, for all we know. Mizerka is usually calm, Ana and Kaito just pissed her off.

    I’m expecting the POG to crash into Prouder Horse at the end of the next episode. The data Cubic sent to Jikukawa was sent to Maze and we get an update on their side at the end of the episode. The arc is going to be reduced to 4 episodes anyway since Kaito and Gammon do a 2 vs 2 in the preview.

  3. Mirun says:

    One I absolutely agree, Phi Brain second season is just wow. And very disappointing. I was a little iffy originally when Freecell was crying that Kaito didn’t remember him. Then the big reveal on the last episode, I was in utter disbelief. I was like, really this is why you want revenge and take over the world. Because you are filled with just angst. At least Rook kind of have a better reason, at least he knew Kaito more than one day and talked to him more than one day. But even then Rook’s motivations were slightly iff “you don’t love me any more”. Okay then Rook. But at least there was development in the character. Not this Freecell crap. And I mean who names their child Freecell, obviously she didn’t love him as much because there is no hell in way you name a kid Freecell. I hope it’s a code name, because wow.

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  • Kaiser Eoghan
    (Thursday, Oct 8. 2015 10:11 PM)
    My concern for subete is largely, is it 11 or 22 episodes long? 22 episodes would be better because the story could develop better.
  • Kaiser Eoghan
    (Thursday, Oct 8. 2015 10:04 PM)
    I had a look into the black jack manga and I remember the other two black jack anime I saw, the mangas stories seem a bit more fantastical.
  • Kaiser Eoghan
    (Thursday, Oct 8. 2015 10:00 PM)
    And this really looks to be more grown up and mature than sakurako. Sakurako was pretty disappointing.
  • Kaiser Eoghan
    (Thursday, Oct 8. 2015 09:59 PM)
    *return back to form
  • Kaiser Eoghan
    (Thursday, Oct 8. 2015 09:58 PM)
    Subete episode one, finally for the first time in ages I have an anime to get proper excited over. All that stuff with the professor lady was really intriguing, Asano’s drawings transfer nicely into anime. The two leads have good chemistry. I think this is a step back to for for noitamina. I have however heard that characters cut from the drama will apparently appear in the anime though.
  • Kaiser Eoghan
    (Thursday, Oct 8. 2015 07:03 PM)
    @Realist: still my favourite Asano work is Punpun.
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    (Thursday, Oct 8. 2015 07:01 PM)
    @Realist: The things that stood out best for me was that bloody scene in chapter 24, the kid who speaks the alien language and I liked the twintails girl. I also liked the little musings of the main characters and it was kind of sad when you know who died. A bit more humour than I’d associate with Asano but it amused me
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    (Thursday, Oct 8. 2015 07:01 PM)
    @Realist: I actually just finished reading the available three volumes of dead demons. At first I wasn’t sure I liked the idea of Asano doing something like this but it quickly grew on me.
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    (Thursday, Oct 8. 2015 06:43 PM)
    Hi Emma, hope you are well.
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